Analysis of Students' Works

1. we put our bag and took a rest for few minutes


2. After that we went out the tea garden


3. Cos, the location of our villa was in the top of a hill


4. there was a stream near from the villa


5. The water were fresh..


6. We walked around here and exploring surrounding area untill


7. we lunch together


8. We were like camping


9. We ate foods which brought from home


10. While we ate, we met other tourist


11. They joined with us


12. We chatted and play gitar


13. It was fun meeting people who had same hoby touring


14. We laughed and sang some my friends even danced until afternoon


15. We went to bed almost down, no wonder


16. We got up late following day


17. the text day we day we out bound with others tourists who staying in the villa


18. We adventured in the forest

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