Monday, August 22, 2011

Analysis of Students' Works




  1. we put our bag and took a rest for few minutes

  2. After that we went out the tea garden

  3. Cos, the location of our villa was in the top of a hill

  4. there was a stream near from the villa

  5. The water were fresh..

  6. We walked around here and exploring surrounding area untill

  7. we lunch together

  8. We were like camping

  9. We ate foods which brought from home

  10. While we ate, we met other tourist

  11. They joined with us

  12. We chatted and play gitar

  13. It was fun meeting people who had same hoby touring

  14. We laughed and sang some my friends even danced until afternoon

  15. We went to bed almost down, no wonder

  16. We got up late following day

  17. the text day we day we out bound with others tourists who staying in the villa

  18. We adventured in the forest



Please underline the wrong expressions to be corrected!

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